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【读后续写】双语微技能:情绪描写技巧

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【读后续写】双语微技能:情绪描写技巧

读后续写的情绪描写,并不是每一个都要外显表达出来。有时候,故事情节的转变,也会带来人物情绪的变化,才能推动故事继续发展。即故事情节发展和人物情绪结合

一、高分情绪描写句子

1.开心

① The smile on her face shone like adiamond.

② A smile of understanding flashed acrosshis face.

③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.

④ Laughter lingered around the room.

⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.

⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her.

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shonelike diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.

⑧ I was wild with joy.

⑨ I was pleased beyond description.

⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.

2.生气

① I was seized by anger.

② He was fuming with rage.

③ His anger boiled over.

④ He could hardly/scarcely contain hisrage.

⑤ He was breathing fire and fury.

⑥ His voice trembled with anger.

⑦ He gave me a look of burning anger.

⑧ He glared at me with burning eyes.

⑨ He flared up at the word.

⑩ His face clouded with anger.

3.忧伤

①He stood silently, tears rolling down hischeeks.

② I feel like I am floating in an ocean ofsadness.

③ Her hands were shaking. She was on theverge of tears.

④ H earing the news, so desperate was hethat he drowned sadness in wine.

⑤ She burst into tears and ran out of theroom.

⑥ She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.

⑦ I tried to fight back tears. /My eyeswere filled with tears.

⑧ A frown(皱眉)now stood on his face.

⑨ They sat there with glum looks on theirfaces. 

⑩ The news cast a cloud of gloom over hisface.

4.恐惧

①He turned to me, with his eyes full ofhorror.

②Fear slowly creeps upon her.

③She was struck with horror when...

④She was choked by fear.

⑤Her face turned pale and stood theretongue-tied.

⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fearflooded over him.

⑦Her heart beat so violently that she feltnearly suffocated(窒息).

⑧She shook all over, feeling like sittingon pins and needles.

5. 感动

① Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们……

② Tears filling her eyes, she offered herheartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。

③ With tears streaming down her face,she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……

 二、高分情绪描写技巧

1.情绪描写之喜乐

1.难以形容的开心:indescribably wild joy  

2.极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved

3.几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情:can hardly conceal his excitement

4.既兴奋又开心:a mixture of excitement and happiness

5.激发某人的激情:kindle sb. with/to passion

6.显示出极大的意愿:show a greater readiness

7.被强烈地吸引:be powerfully attracted to

8.心情愉快:in cheerful spirits

9.振作精神:keep up one·s spirits

10.满意的表情:a satisfied look

11.对...感到满意:be content with

12.对...很高兴:be delighted at

13.为成功而欣喜:be excited/ thrilled with joy at the success

14.被...场面所吸引:be fascinated by the spectacle of

15.被她的美貌所吸引:be fascinated with her beauty

16.因...而高兴:be joyful over/about

17.喜爱,对...着迷: be keen on 

18.快乐至极:be overwhelmed with

19.高兴地跳起来:dance/jump for joy

20.欣喜若狂:be wild with delight

21. —个令人鼓舞的表情:an encouraging expression

22.过一个愉快的假日:have a pleasant holiday

23.心满意足,非常幸福:on the top of the world

24.对...感到非常高兴:overjoyed at/to do

二、描述喜乐心情的常用句有:

① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.

  她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。

② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.

  他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。

③  A ripple of excitement ran through them.(ripple n.波纹;涟漪 vt. 扩散全身)

  一阵激动声穿过他们。

④  Laughter lingered around the room.(linger继续逗留

  笑声在房间里萦绕。

⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.

  他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。

⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐)took hold of her.

  一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。

⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.

  令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。

⑧  I was wild with joy.

  我欣喜若狂。

⑨  I was pleased beyond description.

  我高兴得难以形容。

⑩  She wore a shining smile on her face.

  她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。

⑪ Her smile lit up the whole room.

  她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

⑫ She shed tears of joy.

  她高兴得流下了眼泪。

⑬ Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.

  她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。

⑭ She was overflowing with happiness.

  她洋溢着幸福。

⑮ Her flushed face was shining with excitement.(flush v.发红)

  她激动得满脸通红。

三、增加细节描述的一个万能小技巧:

可以把这些词和so/such.+adj./n....that...句型连用

或者用with+n. 结构

翻译练习1:

当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。 

参考答案:1.When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.

2. 1) When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光)

2) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)

3) When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)

 翻译练习2:

当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。

1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述,先将意思表达清楚。

2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述,注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。参考答案:1.When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.

2.1) When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)   

2) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed (堆满笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间) 

3) When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)

2.情绪描写之生气

feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm(say angrily);

sth. makes sb’s blood boil(sth makes sb extremely angry); clasp one’s hands; clench one’s fists/teeth; speechless

练一练:

Sam 感到非常生气。

【答案一】:Sam felt very angry.

【答案二】:Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.

【答案三】:Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.

【答案四】:Boiling with rage, Sam shook his fist at me.

【答案五】:Filled with fury, Sam was unable to utter a single word.

3. 情绪描写之伤心痛苦

sad; bitter; sorrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness) surge within sb; one’s heart ache; be overcome with sadness

练一练:

她伤心不已。

【答案一】:She felt extremely sad.

【答案二】:A sadness came over her.

【答案三】:Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.

【答案四】:Numb with grief, she became speechless.

【答案五】:Feeling a surge of sadness, she couldn’t help crying bitterly.

【答案六】:Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.

4.情绪描写之哭

cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying; (one’s eyes) brim with/be full of/be filled with tears

练一练:

他哽咽欲哭。

【答案】:A lump came to his throat.

她的双眼哭得通红

【答案】:Her eyes were red from crying.

她的眼里满含泪水。

【答案】:Her eyes brimmed with tears.

眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.

【答案】:Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.

Oliver 独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水

【答案】:Alone in the room, Oliver cried bitter, lonely tears.

Wilbur哭着直到睡着。

【答案】:Wilbur cried himself to sleep.

六、情绪描写之害怕:

frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold sweat; be full of fear; be filled with terror; be rooted to the spot; freeze; run away; flee; one’s knees feel weak; (hands) sweat;

练一练:

我感到很害怕。

【答案一】:I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.

【答案二】:I was in (a) panic/ was full of fear.

【答案三】:I stood rooted to the spot, brimming with fear/filled with fear.

【答案四】:I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.

【答案五】:I froze with terror, too scared to move.

【答案六】:I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.

实战演练

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
    On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.
     The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. The officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右;

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语:

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1

The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.                                                                                       

Paragraph 2

The farmer was lucky. A few days later,                                        

参考范文

Paragraph 1:

The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, thinking he would be sentenced to death by killing people. But he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. Helpless, he was eager that someone could come and save him.

Paragraph 2:

The farmer was lucky. A few days later, a young man came to the police station, followed by a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! Seeing the police officer use a knife killing the man late in the evening, he was so frightened that he quickly ran away. The young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he plucked up enough courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, evidence showed that what the young man had said was true. Consequently, the evil police officer was sent into prison and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.

【点评】文章故事情节紧凑合理,叙述流畅,表达准确。语言表达形式丰富,能合理使用各种从句、现在分词、过去分词等。afraid, helpless, eager, frightened 和pluck up enough courage 生动细腻地描写了文中人物的内心活动,使故事内容更加充实动人。